Comments on: Black eyes

By: spasmicallyperfect

spasmicallyperfect — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 05:09:10 +0000

Mind boggling update:
She’s now pregnant.
She looked happy for a while.
Until yesterday where the make up came back out.

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20080111-Sniff, Sniff « Flynn’s Blogs — Mon, 03 Mar 2008 02:00:20 +0000

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By: krkbaker

krkbaker — Fri, 13 Jul 2007 11:59:35 +0000

No, I hadn’t read this. Sorry, looks like I missed the alien one above this one too.
I thought I just came by here two days ago.
Spaz, my poem Don’t Judge Me had nothing to do with this one. Even though apparently they have a hint of similarities. The judging in my poem is more about a poet not wanting to use the metaphor to cover things up and make a reader guess what something is about. That’s where the other comes in, the violence. I heard someone say the other day that pain is the best form of literary training, if you go through enough of it, then you learn to quit beating around the bush and say what you have to say. Sorry this is so long but I did want to clear this up. The two while it may seem similar are nothing at all alike. Just one of those things I guess. Great poem though. kim

Interesting thought ‘pain the best form of literary training’, …… I would guess that doesn’t just go for pain, but I can see where that one is coming from. See for me that’s the beauty with writing, one doesn’t need to beat around the bush, you can do much better then that, you can plant a new one…… Thanks for clearing things up, and your e-mail too.

By: writerchick

writerchick — Mon, 09 Jul 2007 00:21:07 +0000

Provocative and hard to read. That’s a good thing. You do see so much, don’t you S? I hope she hears you someday.

This was hard to write too, cause I can’t help just getting terribly frustrated and upset. I have more to say, but I am not sure it belongs here. Might send you an e-mail later……

By: Shyma

Shyma — Sun, 08 Jul 2007 05:23:01 +0000

I am sure your support and Love will pull her thru it all…..

Thank you very much.

By: enreal

enreal — Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:29:24 +0000

So sad and beautiful just the same. My prayers are with that suffering soul

Thank you Enreal. I’ll keep fighting for her.